I am poem

                                             I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am a thinker all about friendship

I wonder if I can be the best famous  gymnast in hawke's bay  

I hear birds singing in the colourful bright green trees

I see my cat and dog learning to be friends and not fight

I want to swim beneath the colourful coral reef next to my dad

I am a thinker that never gives up

I pretend I am a famous gymnastics  girl

I feel safe with my family around me because they are there to support me

I touch my device as the button's click

I worry about when my dog goes missing because I’m scared he’s going to get hit by a car

I cry when my friends let me down

I am a thinker who cares about friendship

I understand when learning gets tough

I say kind words to everyone including family and friends

I dream of kittens everywhere because they are so cute

I am proud of my poem because I put my personal best into completing it. I tried to put my own feelings into it and make it interesting for the reader. I hope they feel the same way I did when I read my poem.