I am poem

                                             I am…

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Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am a thinker all about friendship

I wonder if I can be the best famous  gymnast in hawke's bay  

I hear birds singing in the colourful bright green trees

I see my cat and dog learning to be friends and not fight

I want to swim beneath the colourful coral reef next to my dad

I am a thinker that never gives up

I pretend I am a famous gymnastics  girl

I feel safe with my family around me because they are there to support me

I touch my device as the button's click

I worry about when my dog goes missing because I’m scared he’s going to get hit by a car

I cry when my friends let me down

I am a thinker who cares about friendship

I understand when learning gets tough

I say kind words to everyone including family and friends

I dream of kittens everywhere because they are so cute

I am proud of my poem because I put my personal best into completing it. I tried to put my own feelings into it and make it interesting for the reader. I hope they feel the same way I did when I read my poem.

We are learning to solve problems in technology. my question was what do we need if we are lost in the bush? The first thing we had to do was plan what we were going to make. We had to draw a diagram of what it was going to look like and all the materials we needed.  It was a very big challenge for me  because my plan didn't work out the first time. The handle broke off after I had glued it on. But I persevered and went back into my plan to think of some different ideas and then I  changed the handle part to a square handle and this worked. I am proud of my technology invention because I persevered to make it.

My idea is using a fire to boil water to make it safe to drink. My plan is using two cups and one cup will have little holes in the bottom and when you pour the river water into the cup it dissolves and the clean water go through the holes into the other cup and its clean water and safe to drink.